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In The Dark Iss2. Pg13 by Comickpro In The Dark Iss2. Pg13 by Comickpro
It's story time! :fuzzydemon:

Sin has been known to talk a LOT, so letís hope you guys are ready for some actual reading haha. Also please let me know if you catch any misspelled words so I can correct it :]


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Drawn in Ink on Bristol Board
In The Dark Comic (c) Crystal Gonzalez
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:iconjshadslythecat:
JShadslythecat Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Student General Artist
WOW, is that Sin's real form?? Its so awesome!

...and cute. SO CUTE. (I think things that are awesome are cute, its perfectly normal! ;D)

Wonderful work on this page, i love it. Stories! XD
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
yeah its a bit of it :D just the tip of his tail actually heh

and thanks!!
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:iconjshadslythecat:
JShadslythecat Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Student General Artist
He is soooo awesome X3
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:iconmidnas-little-shadow:
I kinda expected Sin to be pissy and stingy and just half ass a short pointless (but very entertaining for us!) story just to get the hell outta there. Guess not.

Still, VERY GREAT. It never fails to amaze me how you incoperate real life views and history into your stories with such amazing ideology and accuracy.

In other news, I love the little tiny Sin thats just SMUSHED in between a huge speech bubble and two panels. its just too damned cute. I REALLY wanna see Sin's real form, but I probably shouldn't want to see it for the moment he gains his powers back, he'll kill me first thing for calling him "cute".

butweallknowitstruehowdamnedadorablethatlittlesinis.
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Comickpro Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Haha yeah XD You would think it would be short and simple! But he’s so vain that any opportunity to brag about himself or the sins he created are moments he can’t pass up. :b And thanks! I always worry that when I write large blocks of text and exposition that they get confusing or boring to the reader and only I can understand what I wrote XD haha so I'm glad you thought it came out okay. As for the tiny sin lmao well that was because when I laid out the panels it left this odd tiny gap and I didn’t like it being left empty...so I changed the text into a big word bubble and drew a tiny sin in the gap haha. This page could really use some better layout....I think I did the next page better actually
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SinisterIdol Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm liking this story so far :la:
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Cool glad its reading well and now confusing (which I worried about heh)
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Tsukasa57 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
finally i get to see Sin's true form before satan cheated on the poker game i think
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
yeah XD but so far its just little bits and pieces shown
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Magmos Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
Finnaly, a story!
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Yuup!! :D
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Muhalovka Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
Your comics never disappoint me, I add them to my favorites before I even read them
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
lmao XD well hopefully you still actually READ them right???
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:iconmuhalovka:
Muhalovka Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
Ofcourse!

Don't even assume I don't read them D:
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner May 2, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
haha ;D okay okay just checking lmao thanks again!
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:iconmuhalovka:
Muhalovka Featured By Owner May 2, 2011
ah can't wait for the next comic
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ExploadingRabbits Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
o: whoa sin looked like a dragon...awesome.
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:D Thanks!
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dragoncaretaker92 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are you going to draw Sin in his original form? Before he became enslaved to Fibble?
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Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah it might show up in another flash back ;] later on in the comic...
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dragoncaretaker92 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEAH MAN
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Alakamame Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
wait... is that just Sinīs tail?
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Yup :nod:
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Alakamame Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Filmographer
Lets-a think.... if the tail is bigger than his own demons... and demons are like 10 meters high.... so... My my, Sin is reaaally, really big (o_o)
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Comickpro Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Yeah Sin was really huge in the past! haha :D but like he said "even back then" he wasn’t completely his FULL size...but thats another flashback for another time later on...
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toxickat13 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
oooo I want to see sin in his real form now
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Maye it will show up later in another flash back ;]
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toxickat13 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I CAN BERLY WAITE
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dragoncaretaker92 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too!
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toxickat13 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
It has to be epic
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Alba-Jimenez Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooh~ Nice story and good way to take history over Idolatry. Going to read the other page :dummy:
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Whoo! Thanks :D
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:iconwowza-wowzers:
Wowza-Wowzers Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAY! STORY TIME1 STORY TIME! Unca sin is going to tell us a heart warming story :D
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Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Only the best!
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Wowza-Wowzers Featured By Owner May 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol, funny :D
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reallyeasy Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
squeee! Two updates in one day! I would have been ecstatic enough with two 'normal' comic updates that followed more plot development, but THESE two new updates were an amazing delectable delight! We're getting a little bit about the actual history of Sin, hell, demons and Sin's creations... not to mention a little insight into what IS Sin's ultimate goal and purpose. I love it!

The history of Idolatry was fascinating! It's a brilliant and amazing observation about how the worship of cows, bulls and other such domesticated animals used to be so widespread across ALL cultures, specifically BECAUSE they were the main source of wealth and security for the tribes and clans. So I loved the explanation behind 'The Golden Calf'. Brilliant!!

And then I also loved your slant on the old mythology, showing how demon-gods lose their powers if they lose their appeal and relevance to humans. Fascinating! It shows how demons are a reflection of human needs and desires, and how human sins in turn become a reflection of the demons. Brilliantly thought provoking.

heh... Sin is actually providing a VERY decent story to the whining Evil-Birds. I was expecting him to be stingy, and narrate something short and useless (albeit entertaining), but this is a really MEATY narrative that he's feeding them. Fantastic!

Oh, and the glimpse of Sin's true form... Pretty damned awesome and frightening. LOVED it!!
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Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks reallyeasy! :D I'm so glad you picked up on the way I tried to relate the cultural broadness of the past relying on livestock for their wealth and security :D Since it’s something that definitely stemmed out of many parts of the world I figured that might be the best animal to go for...while at the same time yeah the golden calf story is definitely an inspiration I pulled from haha.

Also lol, yeah Sin is actually telling a pretty good story for those birds, huh?? XD He is a vain and proud character so of course anything to glorify his past deeds and history is something he could go on and on about and if the birds are willing to be his audience he will tell them about it heh :b
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pikaphobic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
yay!!! i love this comic!!!
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks!! :D
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pikaphobic Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
np!:)
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
Awesome!
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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YugiDMega Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
np
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LucasSLimas Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
go check my pages too
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LucasSLimas Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
incredible you are great
this is a good comic
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:iconcomickpro:
Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thnanks for reading my comic! :D I appreciate it a lot
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Luke-the-F0x Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty cool story about a bull demon that fed on souls and how it decomposed over time. Maybe it could be a supermodel.

Awesome comic mate.
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Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
haha a supermodel XD Lady gaga already did that with the decaying meat dress I think
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KDragongirl Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
I must see original sin XD
Reminds me of a Black dragon of some sort.
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Comickpro Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
It will probably be revealed in a flash back later on as the comic goes on :D but for not its just bits and pieces heh
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